Derek Powazek Help Wanted Ad: Great Writing!

November 21st, 2006 by GL

We’re Hiring!
Posted by Derek Powazek on 24 October 2006If you’re in the San Francisco area and are interested in a fulltime job putting together the coolest magazines anywhere, read on!

We have two positions open now to work on JPG and future magazines. We’re looking for a talented Programmer and Web Developer.

The Programmer should love PHP like a brother – you know him well, love his capabilities, and tolerate his eccentricities. You should also be able to rock the MySQL, and have tons of experience building intensely member-driven sites. Bonus points for photography buffs. We’re neutral on the Nikon/Canon debate.

The Web Developer should know the difference between XHTML strict and transitional, and why one is better than the other. You should know CSS inside and out and be almost as good at Javascript so you can help with all that newfangled Ajax stuff the kids are crazy about these days.

We’re looking for passionate, talented people for both positions now. Your presence in San Francisco is strongly preferred. We’ll consider telecommuters, but only if you’re crazy skilled. I mean like “you can move things with your mind” skilled. Seriously.

Wanna apply? Drop us a line! Be sure to include links to your work and a description of your role in each project.

The First Four Lines

September 7th, 2006 by GL

My friend Peter Weddles writes about the critical first lines in a job ad for the internet:

 

Feature: The First Four Lines

Job seekers are investing more time in their visits to job boards. According to a recent survey we conducted here at WEDDLE’s, most visitors now spend at least twenty minutes on these sites, and more than a quarter (27%) actually spend thirty minutes or more. The good news is that most of this time is devoted to looking at the job openings we post on the sites. The bad news is that our ads aren’t always viewed in the same way.Job seekers, of course, are not generic beings. They fall into one of two populations—active or passive—and it’s that status which determines how they look at job postings. Active job seekers will consider any and all ads—those that are well written and those that are not. They will ignore unclear descriptions and uninviting value propositions and apply anyway. Passive job seekers will simply ignore poorly written job postings altogether. They represent more of the top talent that organizations most want to recruit, so they have too many choices to spend their time plowing through job postings with all of the excitement of a brick.

How can you be sure that your job postings capture the attention and pique the interest of passive job seekers? Understand and respect the characteristics that define and set them apart.

  • Active job seekers are, by definition, actively looking for a job. Most are determined and even aggressive in their pursuit of employment opportunities. They need to find work, so in most cases, they will seek employers out and overlook any shortcomings in their job postings.
  • Passive job seekers aren’t job seekers at all. More often than not, they are already employed; to be recruited, therefore, they must be persuaded to move from their current employer to another. No one seeks the disruption such a change will cause, however, so passive prospects put it off by holding job postings to a very high standard.What is that standard? Passive prospects have the attention span of a gnat. They expect to be informed and captivated in a very short period of time. In practical terms, that means you must work magic in the first four lines of your job postings. That introductory text must transform a person who isn’t looking for a job and doesn’t want to change employers into someone who is at least willing to read further. The rest of the posting must convince them to become active, but the first four lines create the suspension of inactivity that makes such an outcome possible. To put it another way, well written introductions shift passive prospects to “active-ready” job seekers.

    To achieve that high standard, the first four lines of a job posting must include the following four elements in the following order:

    1. A powerful, compelling statement about why the opening is a “dream job.” Passive prospects are willing to make a change in employers, but only if they believe they will get to do interesting work and interact with talented peers.

    2. An equally powerful and compelling statement about why your organization is a “dream employer.” Passive prospects don’t look for a job; they seek opportunities with employers that will encourage and support their best work and advance their careers.

    3. A statement regarding the compensation the opening provides. A salary range is sufficient, but such terms as “competitive” and “commensurate with experience” are not. Most passive prospects don’t work for the money; they work for the intrinsic satisfaction they derive from doing interesting work for a supportive employer. In our culture, however, money is a measure of how much that work is valued, so they will not make a move unless they know there is a financial advantage to doing so.

    4. A statement that underscores your employer’s commitment to protecting candidate confidentiality. Since most passive prospects are employed, they are risk averse in the job market. They can only be engaged if they are convinced that their identity will not be revealed at any point to anyone outside your organization.

    All of that is what you should say in the first four lines. How you say it is equally as important. For maximum impact on passive prospects:

  • Be concise and use short, hard-hitting statements. The goal is not to describe your entire value proposition in the introduction, but rather to elicit an emotional response—to get a reluctant reader to make a spur-of-the-moment decision to read on.
  • Use the second person, wherever possible. It’s much more effective to tell someone “You will get to do this” or “You will be able to accomplish that” than to speak in the impersonal third person with phrases like “The successful candidate will have experience in this” or “Applicants must be able to do that.”
  • Avoid inside jargon that is unique to your organization as it will make prospects feel like outsiders. Instead, use words and phrases that reflect the values and culture of your organization that were most appealing to its highest performing employees when they were recruited.The sequence or order in which these elements are presented will also influence their effectiveness. Traditionally, the search engines for job databases at job boards produce search results that list openings by the title of their posting. (See my August 24, 2006 column for an introduction to writing powerful titles for job postings.) More recently, however, a small, but growing number of search engines are also providing the first several lines of each posting. By organizing your ad to begin with what passive prospects want, you lead with your strength. You tell them up front what’s in it for them, and that’s the way you transform them from passive prospects to “active-ready” job seekers.
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    What Ads REALLY mean…

    August 14th, 2006 by GL

    The following post was posted today on Robert Merrill’s Good Recruits

    I received a funny note about the way classified ads are written:

    Word processing skills essential:
    There’s a crippling case of carpal tunnel syndrome in your future.

    Salary range $24,000 – $32,000/yr:
    The salary is $24,000.

    Civil service:
    This job was filled from the inside six months ago.

    Top-notch communications skills:
    Telemarketing.

    Outstanding benefits package:
    Health insurance.

    Progressive Company:
    Employees get to wear jeans every other Friday.

    Dedicated:
    You’re looking at a minimum of 80 hours a week from now until you’re forced into early-retirement.

    Tons of variety:
    They took all the heinous tasks no other employee would do and rolled them into one job.

    Words won’t describe it accurately anyway…

    August 2nd, 2006 by GL

    I assume the following is true. After all, it WAS on the internet.

    I guess it takes all kinds—-

    (Taken from http://jayg123.googlepages.com/funniestlookingforajobad,ever!)

    Example of a very honest ad

    AntiPattern: Bore People to Death With Your Job Ads

    July 31st, 2006 by GL

    A common piece of advice to job seekers is: Don’t focus your resume and cover letter on what you want; focus on how you offer what the hiring company wants. This advice also applies in reverse to a hiring company writing a job ad, but in practice, it’s almost never followed, which is why this ad for a position at the Irvine Public Schools Foundation (IPSF) jumped out at me:

    (Read the rest of the article here: http://eppsnet.com/2006/05/antipattern-bore-people-to-death-with-your-job-ads)

    How Mark Cuban Writes Job Ads

    July 28th, 2006 by GL

    You have to give it to Mark Cuban.  He is awfully smart and has the money, too. 

    He has a very popular blog—and basically allows the world inside his head.  It alone is an entertaining read.

    So…he wants to find a new player for his team…not his Mavericks team, the other, a business one.  Does he take out an ad on Monster?  No….he challenges job seekers to apply by giving him an idea he needs and hasn’t heard yet.  This sounds a bit like Nick Corcodilos’s advice to jobseekers: Be sure you tell your prospective employer exactly what you can do for him.

    So, the Mark Cuban Challenge is up now, and only about 1,000 people have responded—scroll through their responses.

    The point is, is your help wanted advertising getting this kind of response.  You might not have this type of platform, but you can get the word out by being creative.

    Employers Keep Copies of Your Help Wanted Ads

    July 26th, 2006 by GL

    Increasingly, employers are being watched for any potential discrimination claims.  Some attorneys carefully sift through internet and newspaper ads, looking for help wanted ads that make specific, but discriminatory requests.  Then, they threaten the employer with a suit; most employers hate the resulting publicity and settle the suit to make the ‘problem’ go away.

    Even simple ads or phrases that ask for ‘Recent College Graduates” typically are found  to violate discrimination laws.  THe employer may never have an issue with the ads.  But why risk it?  Keep a copy of all help wanted ads on file for at least one year to prove your point and your commitment to non-discriminatory hiring practices.

    Some help wanted vendors keep copies of all your ads in their archiving system.  Be sure they do, or you need to do the same.

    Welcome One (and all)

    July 25th, 2006 by GL

    Someone told me once that you should write for the one single reader. Make it understandable, clear, direct and to the point for only one person. If that person can read it, then others can too.

    Blogging is a new thing, almost a new science. Here is what I am thinking of doing with this new blog—HELPWANTEDHELP: It seems to me that few of us know how to create a job ad that really communicates to the jobseeker today. It seems so easy that we all should know exactly how to make one.

    If this is true, then why do most help wanted ads sound more like job descriptions than interest generating advertisements for your company. Most are bad, boring…and at worse, truly uninformative and not very helpful for the potential candidate.

    My intention is to shed some light on this topic. And, I hope that at least one reader (!!!) from time to time will add to the discussion and information exchange.

    We will have lots of actual ads as examples, some bad some good some great.

    I am planning on having some fun with this…and I hope you do as well.